english works

At first, it’s a good story. It tells about a relationship between daughter and father that is usual. At early ages of daugher, their relationship was well but when she told that se was lesbian, her father’s reaction was harsh. She was teenager but this couldn’t be a reason for her fault i think because she started to think not good things about her father, she said father “disgusting” and i think father was right. Also i think, the conclusion can be better because i expected different things like start of good relationship between father and daughter again or like this. In addition to this, vocabulary is not difficult for me to understand and this is another advantage of story.

Firstly, I think this story doesn’t have any link with as i thought, because i thought that the story was about family relations. Also, characters that are mentioned at the beginning of the story have no role in story. So, i didn’t like the introduction of the story. I read the whole story but i saw that i doesn’t have conclusive end so i think it is a disadvantage for story. On the other hand, i didn’t understand the role of “Bob Dylan style” because of lack of an end. I think at the end, the girl dreamed all of that actions because of hot weather. In conclusion, story is fascinating the reader and this is the only positive aspect of the story.